PAGE ONE
Panel 1
HANNAH WILLIAMS has seized VARUN
SRINIVASI in a telekinetic grip and slammed him hard into the stone
wall of the monastery.
Hannah is a teenage girl, about 15 or
16, short, thin, with dark brown hair and eyes, a slightly tan
complexion and facial features of indeterminate ethnicity. She's
dressed as a fairly typical young American girl, with jeans, t-shirt,
and a loose-fitting jacket. She doesn't look anywhere near as
powerful as she actually is. Varun is taller, well-built, with
clean-cut facial features and skin tone that clearly mark him as
Middle Eastern. His hair is slightly on the long side for a guy, but
well-kept. He's very pretty, in a way, with smooth, youthful
features, rune-like tattoos on his face and hands, and a style of
dress that uniquely marks him as a demon hunter.
There is a look of cold, dangerous fury
on her face as she advances on Varun, who hits the wall with a hard
thud.
1 CAPTION
The hidden Monastery of
Medici. Italy.
2 HANNAH
Let. My brother. Go.
3 HANNAH
Right now, goddammit, or
I'll—
Panel 2
Close-up on Varun, still being held up
against the wall. His teeth are grit and body is tense in struggle,
but he's actually smiling down at Hannah.
4 VARUN
You'll what?
5 VARUN
Tear this place apart? Bring
the whole structure crashing down on us?
6 HANNAH (O.P.)
MAYBE!
Panel 3
Medium shot. Varun is still pinned up
against the wall and Hannah is facing him, one arm raised slightly as
she maintains her telekinetic hold on him. She's barely holding her
anger in as they talk. He's calm, but a little rattled.
7 VARUN
Won't do you any good, sweetie. He'll still die, and I'll simply be succeeded by another hunter, as will all the monks. 8 VARUN
The only difference would be that you'd die too.
9 HANNAH
Maybe I don't care about that.
10 VARUN
And maybe I think you're bluffing.
Panel 4
Close-up on Hannah, who is smiling mirthlessly—and mercilessly—up
at Varun.
11 HANNAH
You just don't get it. Do you, pretty-boy?
12 HANNAH
I don't care how cute you are. I don't care if you can fight demons, and vampires, and other things I can't put a name to. Right now, all I care about are two things.
13 HANNAH
That my brother's in there, where your monks are killing
him—
Panel 5
Medium close-up on Varun as Hannah
looks up at him. Varun looks like he's having a much harder time
breathing now, and is struggling in vain against the telekinetic
bonds Hannah has him in.
14 HANNAH
—and that you will fix that, now!
15 VARUN
<GASP!> Wind... pipe...! <GASP!>
Panel 6
Hannah releases her hold on Varun, who
falls unceremoniously to the floor, coughing fitfully and gasping for
air. Hannah is looking over him balefully, one fist clenched
viciously.
16 HANNAH
Now, get to work, before I really get angry!
17 VARUN
<Coughing and gasping>
PAGE TWO
Panel 1
Varun has lifted his head up to look at
her, an expression of anger and defiance on his face.
1 VARUN
Even if I wanted to
help, I can't!
2
VARUN
The monks have started a ritual to weaken your brother, both physically and spiritually, so the demon can be reaped from his body. Disrupting it would be extremely unsafe, for everyone involved!
Panel 2
Hannah is
looking evenly at Varun as he rises. She's unimpressed by his anger,
amply buoyed by her own.
3
HANNAH
Details?
4 VARUN
The
monks themselves would fight me to ensure it's properly carried out.
Panel 3
Medium close-up
on Varun. He is solemn and dead serious as he explains the risks to
her.
5 VARUN
Assuming I survive, the ritual will have angered the demon that's trying to bond with him. If disrupted, it could change the nature of its hold on him.
6 VARUN
And before you ask, no, I don't know how.
Panel
4
Extreme close-up on Varun's eyes, narrowed resentfully as he looks at
Hannah.
7 VARUN
Because no one has ever been foolish enough
to interrupt it.
Panel
5
Medium close-up on Hannah, who is smiling a thin, dangerous smile at
Varun. Her mind is made up, and she will not be talked out of it.
8 HANNAH
Well, you've been talking about how you want to impress this brotherhood of yours. Here's your opportunity.
9 VARUN
Hannah...
Panel
6
Hannah has
gotten in Varun's face, and is pressing a finger into his chest.
Varun actually looks surprised, and cowed by her anger and rage.
10 HANNAH
I never agreed to let you or your people murder my
brother!
PAGE
THREE
Panel 1
Splash page. Medium close-up on JASON
WILLIAMS, lashed to a stone pillar with heavy-duty chains in the
middle of a large, arena-like room in the monastery.
He is about 30, has a thin-medium build, with
short dark brown hair and irises. Some crazy changes are overtaking
his body. His skin has taken on an uneven, purplish-magenta hue, and
his muscle tone has hardened considerably. His eyes have taken on a
yellow color, and spines are starting to sprout in a line down the
sides of his neck and shoulders.
Clipped to each of his forearms is a
bracer-like mechanism, each with three chains attached to it. They
are pulled taut in different directions, his arms stretched out from
the rest of his body. It's not possible to see from this shot, but
several monks have each taken a chain and are keeping him stretched
tight. He is in agony, though whether it's from the changes he's
enduring or the ritual the monks are inflicting upon him is not
currently known.
1 HANNAH (CAP)
And I will never let
the people I love suffer or die needlessly.
2 HANNAH (CAP)
Ever.
3 HANNAH (CAP)
That's my brother in there, and I know he's going through something I can't begin to imagine. Some demon thinks it can use him as a host to walk on this world.
4 HANNAH (CAP)
You and your brotherhood seem to think the only
solution is killing him.
5 HANNAH (CAP)
Well, today, that changes.
PAGE FOUR
Panel 1
One of the monks
holding one of the arm chains is suddenly lifted off his feet,
surprise and fear dominating his features.
1 HANNAH
(CAP)
Because using destruction as a solution is cruel.
Panel 2
He's hurled
violently into another monk nearby.
2 HANNAH
(CAP)
It's unfair.
Panel 3
Close-up on
Jason, who's just noticed the chains on his right arm slacken. He
looks around for an opportunity...
3 HANNAH
(CAP)
And today at least, I'm not having it.
Panel 4
Varun has
charged into the arena, brandishing a blunt polearm that nonetheless
looks intimidating, and sweeps several nearby monks off their feet
with one wide, strong sweep. Several monks further off look shocked,
surprised, and offended by the display. Hannah is nearby, staying
clear of Varun's fighting arc, lifting and throwing a couple of other
nearby monks.
4
VARUN
Apologies, my brothers, but today's ritual has been
postponed!
5 HANNAH
What
he said! Let my brother go!
6 MONK
1
BETRAYAL! TO ARMS!
7 MONK 2
We
are undone!
Panel 5
Jason, taking
advantage of the momentary confusion, whips the loose chains on his
right arm around in a vicious arc, slamming them hard into the monks
holding his left arm. He looks almost gleeful as he does it.
8 JASON
Hear
that, old Pharaoh?!
9 JASON
“Let my people go!”
Panel 6
Wide shot. Monks begin to surround
Varun and Hannah, who continue to hold them off and knock them down
while Jason, hands free, gets a grip on the chains binding him to the
pillar. Some monks have only just begun to notice that he's getting
free, and are pointing at him.
10 HANNAH
He's doing it! They're
starting to panic!
PAGE FIVE
Panel 1
Medium close-up on
Jason and the pillar. The chains around him won't break, but the
pillar is starting to crack and strain as he pulls on them. There's
a vicious smile playing about his mouth, even as the exhaustion wears
on his body.
1 JASON
Of
course, as spirituals go, I prefer “Joshua Fit the Battle of
Jericho.”
Panel 2
Close-up on the
pillar cracking and breaking from the stress. It starts to tip
backwards...
2 JASON
“And
the walls come tumblin' down!”
Panel 3
The pillar falls,
backwards from Jason, taking out an entire cone of the north side of
the arena. Most of the monks have gotten clear, though some can be
seen pinned beneath the wreckage.
3 SFX
CRASH!!!
Panel 4
Close-up on Hannah
and Varun, who are stunned by the display.
4 HANNAH
Whoa.
5 VARUN
What she
said.
Panel 5
Jason makes his
way towards Hannah and Varun, casually peeling off his chains and
bracers. The monks have fled the scene, or are still doing so,
afraid for their lives. Hannah and Varun regard him cautiously.
6 JASON
Now
that's what I call a command performance.
7 HANNAH
You
look like the Hulk.
8 JASON
I sound
like the Hulk.
9 JASON
Not that
there's anything wrong with that.
Panel 6
Jason takes Hannah
in his arms for a hug, which she returns as Varun looks on,
momentarily pleased.
10 JASON
Thanks,
noob. For coming after me like that. They would have—
11 HANNAH
Shhh.
No they wouldn't have. No way in hell I would've let them.
12 JASON
Still.
Thank you.
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